In your first set of shots, you need to list EVERY shot you plan to use here. That's why this is called a SHOT LIST as you list each and every shot you are going to take. So when you say, the girl will be in a variety of positions on her bed, you need to list them all and note what kind of shot they will be, the type of shot you will use, how long each shot is, etc. Other than that this is good to go so let's fix this and you can film. 3 out of 4
This quarter was absolutely awesome. Can't wait until quarter 4.