Yes! Good to great! Nice first vlog! However you got a jump start as vlogs aren't supposed to be done just yet. It was announced in class that all blogs had to be written until I gave the ok. It's coming but this was supposed to be written. I won't make you redo it but I do want you to pay better attention in class.
On a side note, your project pages aren't completed. You need pages for each new project this year and nothing is posted from your summer news story. Where are your files?
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.